Should this phrase be rewritten?
This is why I
[equate]
summer vacations with putting
[moola] in a pocket that has a small hole in it. The longer the problem is ignored, the bigger the problem becomes.
Instead of treating June, July and August
[like sacred cows]
that can’t be
[messed up]
by
[academics],
[doctor]
the school schedule so that vacation days are evenly
[dished out].